Sorcerer Slayer

WARNING! The review contains spoilers, and you have been warned. Well I tried it, and it was... ambiguous, the plot and the main character are acceptable, but some of the author's decisions raise a lot of questions. Firstly, the choice of a girl?? IN A HAREM GAME?? To be honest, I was shocked that we were actually given a choice, but I think it's too ambitious and unrealistic. Kitsune, Angel, Demon, and Vampire (okay, the Vampire is mandatory so he's out), all with different personalities and types, for some reason I doubt that the author will be able to write a script for all 3 options, or we'll get a teaspoon of new content. Secondly... - You have to choose a partner - Okay - There's Kitsune, Angel, Demon, and Vampire - Not a Vampire, I don't like them and I've killed too many of them - Oh, no problem - Then I choose "insert one of the three" - Fine, but you need 2 familiars. - Umm... ok... - And it has to be a vampire. - AH FOR FUCKS SAKE! And of course the third is my personal pain.: Milf Kitsune greets us and offers one of her daughters: Kitsune Milf - It's simple, you choose one daughter, then give away one of the newborns to make up for it Protagonist - I get it Kitsune Milf - Here's my first daughter Protagonist - I don't like it I - I agree, let's move on Kitsune Milf - Here's the second one Protagonist- I don't like it too I - That's better Kitsune Milf - And here's the third one Protagonist - I don't like it I - waht?? HEY! Who asked you, I'm going to choose, and I'm quite satisfied with her The daughters start fighting, and Kitsune Milf gets annoyed: Kitsune Milf - I'm so annoyed, I'm offering myself to you Protagonist - I don't know... I - ...I was looking for copper, but I found gold, and the choice is made! Protagonist - Hmm, who's that in the corner? I - Oh no...Don't you dare! Kitsune Milf - this is my daughter, she's a loser and an idiot, don't pay attention to her Protagonist - I've made my choice! I - Damn you, author! And i dont eve wanna talk about taht we choose a pathetic midget from a crowd of sexy vampires.

Im looking forward to see where this is going, one thing i would like though, is they stop with all the narrator jump in's that is just annoying, let's focus on the story, and please for the love of god make sure there is enough content in each release, and to keep the story engaging and not jsut some girl hey bed now boing boing boing

So far as of right now the story and consistency of the writing is very poor and random. The story starts out fine at the beginning but as soon as the first LI is introduced if falls downhill very fast. The Main character changes personalities very often. Going from broody and stern to overly friendly and a pushover the next. The choices also do not fit in line with how the MC was first introduced to be a hardened killer. In one instance when one of the early LI does something that would warrant a certain type of reaction. The Mc just rolls over and lets it happen even though if anyone else was in that situation they would be mad or even furious even. Writing 2/5 Characters 2/5 Will update rating in the future is problems are adjusted or even fixed.